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    This is a self portrait of the guy behind the camera.

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    Nice job, self portraits are always really hard to do well. If I was going to be picky it could be just a little sharper around the eye.

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    Yep, the eye should definitely be as sharp as possible. You seem to have got the lips and your sweater sharp instead

    Also, behind your head is a few frames that are a bit distracting and 'growing out of your skull Zooming in and a slightly different angle might have lost those.

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