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    Default New user - please some comments

    Hi... I'm new in the forum, so hello everybody.
    I really apperciate any comment.
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    I quite like this shot! It's got good 'mood' and suggests a story in a very interesting environment.

    My only critique is that I think the shot would have been even more powerful if the model was placed more on the left side. To me she seems a bit too centered. That said I'm not sure how her reflection would have looked.

    Good shot though!

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    I somewhat agree with marko; I think the model is too centered, but she should be more to the right. Also, I think it could benefit from a bit of cropping, as, in my humble opinion, there is too much dead space at the bottom. The concept is great and the execution is great. I love the leaves, they make you wonder...
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