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This is a discussion on town dock within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; this picture seems to have some compositionally correct elements but doesn't really capture my attention... does it yours?...

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    this picture seems to have some compositionally correct elements but doesn't really capture my attention...

    does it yours?
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    It feels like the bright clouds are stealing my attention and competing with the bench in the foreground.

    I might try darkening those clouds and perhaps a crop on the left side.

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