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    Impressive picture. The perfectly calm lake reflects the mountain perfectly, except for the foreground geography. Made my eyes pause and stare to take the whole picture in. Love the mountains. Thanks for sharing this.
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    Wonderful composition here for sure but the entire shot looks soft to me. The shot would also sing louder imo with a contrast boost.
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    Thanks for pointing out the softness issue Marko, maybe this will look better...


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    MUCH better! This is very good sharpness in the top mountain; you could still go sharper if there's room but not by much.

    The contrast boost is better but it could still go higher as well. You're getting close to "slap a frame on that puppy and hang it on your wall"
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    Quote Originally Posted by Marko View Post
    MUCH better! This is very good sharpness in the top mountain; you could still go sharper if there's room but not by much.

    The contrast boost is better but it could still go higher as well. You're getting close to "slap a frame on that puppy and hang it on your wall"
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