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    Hey new here, just wanted some comments, critique, loves hates about my stuff. thanks!!!!!
    This photo was taken on an old abondoned bus near my house, someone smashed out the windows and its a really cool place!
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    Hi AppleShampoo Welcome to the forum.

    I like the perspective you have found in this shot, with the smashed glass adding an unusual and interesting framing. The shot looks a little under exposed to my eye. I sure some of out more experienced members will be able to add some more constructive comments.
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    Welcome to the forum Appleshampoo!!
    I like this shot, I like the juxtaposition of the cracked glass and the branches. I also like the perspective - nice catch!
    I do agree that it looks a bit underexposed. hope that helps - Marko
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    Hey, yourself. Welcome to the forum! I agree with them as well. The darkness does convey a mood but it's a little too dark. Cool image though.
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    Thanks! I really appreciate the feed back!

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