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    Hey Everyone,

    I took the comments that everyone provided regarding the pic and tried to incorporate them. Hopefully, I have made an improvement...


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    Much improved for sure! I dig it.
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    I like the rework Garvin
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    Yes. This one is much better from a technical standpoint. Nicely done.
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    Another vote for the rework. You attention is completely on the rails drawing you to the distance.

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