Lucy

[Ryske]

Thank you belliveau and Marko

For your tips next time definitely will move model away from background. Also will work on pose. Regarding "video game" look I understand you point Marko. As I and model like this kind of pp I would leave it as it is but for my improvement and development I will prepare new version and post it here for further comments.

Take care

Ryszard

[Gremlich]

Her clothing blends in too much with the background. B&W with a light to the left (her right) and perhaps less power on the front lighting

[Hillbillygirl]

Very nice PP skills on the facial area Ryske.
Only one problem I see is, you need to match the rest of her skin tone on body with bronze tone of face.