Results 1 to 8 of 8

Easter Seals Drop Zone

This is a discussion on Easter Seals Drop Zone within the People photography (portraits, sports etc.) forums, part of the Show your photo (Color) - Landscape & Nature (flowers, mountains, storms etc.) category; Just a few images from the Easter Seals Drop Zone that I photographed on Friday....

  1. #1
    Iguanasan's Avatar
    Iguanasan is offline Moderator
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Halifax, NS
    Posts
    10,917
    My Photos
    Please feel free to edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default Easter Seals Drop Zone

    Just a few images from the Easter Seals Drop Zone that I photographed on Friday.

    Name:  IMG_6407.jpg
Views: 258
Size:  253.4 KB

    Name:  IMG_6416.jpg
Views: 207
Size:  214.8 KB

    Name:  IMG_6417.jpg
Views: 220
Size:  182.8 KB

    Name:  IMG_6440.jpg
Views: 233
Size:  260.1 KB

    Name:  IMG_6486.jpg
Views: 230
Size:  203.3 KB
    “If you are out there shooting, things will happen for you. If you’re not out there, you’ll only hear about it.” – Jay Maisel
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Feel free to edit my shots ONLY for use on this forum and critique my shots in ANY discussion area.
    Flickr | Blog | Google+

  2. #2
    Runmonty's Avatar
    Runmonty is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Location
    Adelaide, South Australia
    Posts
    4,095
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    This is good photojournalism in my opinion as you have told a story with these images. All are important for the narrative, however as individual images #3 & #5 really work for me.
    I welcome all critique and comments on any of my photos

    Links to other places you can also find me :


  3. #3
    Marko's Avatar
    Marko is offline Administrator
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    Montreal, QC. Canada
    Posts
    14,870
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    very cool set - last 2 are my faves here.
    For shot 1, I'd probably crop 1 - 1.5 inches inch off the top and right sides - to me that would make it 'balance' and better focus our eyes on all the cool lines in the image.
    Hope that may help.
    - Please connect with me further
    Photo tours of Montreal - Private photography courses
    - Join the new Photography.ca Facebook page
    - Follow me on Twitter http://twitter.com/markokulik
    - Follow me on Google+ https://plus.google.com/u/0/111159185852360398018/posts
    - Check out the photography podcast


    "You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.

  4. #4
    Jim Scrimger is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jun 2013
    Location
    Prescott, Ontario
    Posts
    529
    My Photos
    Please ask before editing my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    As Runmonty says, excellent photojournalism.

  5. #5
    Iguanasan's Avatar
    Iguanasan is offline Moderator
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Halifax, NS
    Posts
    10,917
    My Photos
    Please feel free to edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    Thanks, all.

    So, Marko, you mean like this...

    Name:  IMG_6407.jpg
Views: 189
Size:  166.9 KB
    “If you are out there shooting, things will happen for you. If you’re not out there, you’ll only hear about it.” – Jay Maisel
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Feel free to edit my shots ONLY for use on this forum and critique my shots in ANY discussion area.
    Flickr | Blog | Google+

  6. #6
    Marko's Avatar
    Marko is offline Administrator
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    Montreal, QC. Canada
    Posts
    14,870
    My Photos
    Please do NOT edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    Hey Iggy - -Since you are okay w/edits......
    Here's the crop I'd try (It's not exactly proportionate though)
    I'd be curious to know if you (and/or) other members agree. Thx.
    Attached Images Attached Images  

    - Please connect with me further
    Photo tours of Montreal - Private photography courses
    - Join the new Photography.ca Facebook page
    - Follow me on Twitter http://twitter.com/markokulik
    - Follow me on Google+ https://plus.google.com/u/0/111159185852360398018/posts
    - Check out the photography podcast


    "You have to milk the cow quite a lot, and get plenty of milk to get a little cheese." Henri Cartier-Bresson from The Decisive Moment.

  7. #7
    Michaelaw's Avatar
    Michaelaw is offline Senior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2006
    Location
    Vancouver Canada
    Posts
    4,838
    My Photos
    Please ask before editing my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    Cool set Iggy...Brings back my painting on a swing stage days. I agree with Marcos edit here on that first shot simply because when I look at it I'm drawn into the interesting parts of the image. I'm guessing the negative space in the original balanced out so the eye saw it as a vista, feeling no need to explore. Cropping the neg space draws the eye in. As an establishing shot however maybe it works because we want the vista without regard for the detail, a sot of "Here we are" moment. My 4c anyway

  8. #8
    Iguanasan's Avatar
    Iguanasan is offline Moderator
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    Halifax, NS
    Posts
    10,917
    My Photos
    Please feel free to edit my photos
    Critiques
    Critique my photos anywhere in the forum

    Default

    Totally OK with edits as long as they stay on the forum for instructional purposes. Thanks! I totally get what you are going for. I like it!

    Thanks, Michael. Yes, I think I did just see it as a "vista" -- the view from the roof -- rather than trying to highlight the detail of what's going on in the city.
    “If you are out there shooting, things will happen for you. If you’re not out there, you’ll only hear about it.” – Jay Maisel
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Feel free to edit my shots ONLY for use on this forum and critique my shots in ANY discussion area.
    Flickr | Blog | Google+

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36