Mandalay again...

[ArtphotoasiA]

Second set in Mandalay, gold leaf making!


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Comments and critiques always welcomed...
For the complete job, the story, and more details:
Mandalay

[Hillbillygirl]

Love that last shot APA.

[asnow]

I love the whole set but that last one really stands out to me.

[Marko]

By far, Composition is tightest on that last shot - my fave as well. Love that you caught the monk in mid step as well as the colours as well as the juxtaposition of old and modern.
I agree with the others though - the whole set is interesting.

Shot 1 is also quite cool. If there was a figure in the upper window it would have worked better.....hmmm I might crop it all off just below the sign. That way my eye stays glued to the workers....but I cannot be sure.
- the window might imply something. What do you think? What do others think (if I may be so bold APA)?
Hope that may help.

[Runmonty]

Liking all of these APA. As to Markos suggested crop, I would be tempted to crop just below the centre window, and a tad from the right to exclude the door.