Ghery Flyer

[mpykalo]

Yes that's definitely improving... this image is very challenging

I like shot 2 mpykalo! The burn works. Now we are talking details but imo another 5-10% on the burn couldn't hurt.

The dodge is also nice but I think I'd dodge it all the way toward (or at least try it to see if that works) the sky so as to have the curved highlight lead toward the sky. For me the 'wing' is the focal point of the image.

Hope that helps - Marko

[Marko]

I think this is a much better rendition!

Do others feel the same? Thanks - Marko