This is a discussion on Mendip Sunrise within the Critiques forums, part of the Photography & Fine art photography category; Agree with the others, great shot, especially good rendition of "cold as hell". Generally I find the darkness along the ...
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Agree with the others, great shot, especially good rendition of "cold as hell". Generally I find the darkness along the middle a bit disconcerting, the tree has already been mentioned as a "black hole" but I find there's a similar dark patch on the left side and also, to a lesser extent, on the right side.
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WOW. This is exceptional taffy. Only wish I had taken it! Beautiful - jimmy
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Mendip Sunrise version 2
Thanks everyone for the kind comments.
I have played around with the crop as Bambi suggested and offer this as an alternative.
I'll leave you guys to let me know if you think it is an improvement!
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Last edited by taffy; 01-27-2011 at 04:51 PM.
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Definitely an improvement to my eye. Now the tree has a real place as a silhouette off to the side rather than a blob in the middle. Nice job.
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