I agree with tirediron. I would like to have seen a little more of the staircase. The lighting looks a little harsh the day you took it, maybe you can go back on a cloudy day where the light is diffused a little more? The lighting in the upper part of the staircase is great in the shadows so I think another effort with this would help. This is a good shot, but the lighting is not working for it. You recognized the potential here, which is what counts. Hopefully you can get a second chance at this fella.