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    Focal plane is a little too shallow for me here, MM. A bit distracting to have out-of-focus areas both in front of and behind the subject.
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    I love the detail in the shell. I don't mind the shallow DOF. Maybe it is some sort of distortion field caused by the speed of this little fellow

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    Must have been a really fast shutter speed! Where's the motion blur? :-)

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    Too cute in a ugly cute way! Love the detail in the shell!
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    I also must agree the tail end should be as clear as the rest of the snail. I think a minor change in the angle and you could have used that DOF but right now I am finding the tail just to irritating to look at.
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    I'm okay with the shallow dof here, I really like how sharp the snail's body is as well as the defined skin texture.
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    Not a fan of the unfocused "tail" either; perhaps just crop it out?

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    The texture on the snail's body and shell is amazing. I don't have a big problem with the out of focus tail, but it was one of the first things I noticed.
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    Quote Originally Posted by jmayoff View Post
    The texture on the snail's body and shell is amazing.
    Agreed, it looks as if it has scales, although that's not what those squares are. I guess I've never looked closely at a snail, that picture is kind of educational.

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