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    Hmmm... liking the treatment, not quite so sure about the composition. "Environmental portrait" notwithstanding, it's rather too symetrical for my taste, that is, the subject roughly centred between two paintings. I think I would prefer to see the LH side cropped to about the ladder which would focus more attention on the subject. I agree with having him working, or at least doing something. As is, it's not bad, but I think it would be stronger if he wasn't looking directly into the camera.

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    Nice work!
    I very much like this shot and think it's a good environmental portrait. I agree with T.I. on the placement of the subject, just a wee bit too centered. I like the tones and treatment here except on the subject who looks a tad too green to me.

    Everything else I really like including the view into the next 'space' from the top. I would not crop it. hope that helps- Marko
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    A variation of the first.


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    I really like what you did with the top photo, the second one is nice but the pose in the first one makes it work very well.
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    THanks for the comments, everyone. Very helpful.

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    Really nice treatment. The first pose is defintaly better but loving that starbucks...oh how I miss the city life!
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    Lol, Kat I took his coffee away from him and made him hold a paintbrush in the first photo.

    The small piece on the wall is a work in progress, the one on the easel is a finished piece. He actually works with photos hung on the wall rather than on an easel.

    Here is the 'Mom Ready' photo we took:


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    Oops! I should have said he hangs paintings in progress on the wall to work on them not photos. :(

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