Hmmm... liking the treatment, not quite so sure about the composition. "Environmental portrait" notwithstanding, it's rather too symetrical for my taste, that is, the subject roughly centred between two paintings. I think I would prefer to see the LH side cropped to about the ladder which would focus more attention on the subject. I agree with having him working, or at least doing something. As is, it's not bad, but I think it would be stronger if he wasn't looking directly into the camera.


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