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I too like this shot.
TI - gives good critique here though I can't be sure that colour fringing isn't just a flower past its prime.
My primary suggestion would be lighting. The lighting here is nice and even but the subject matter is yearning, begging, pleading, for some shadows and a whip.![]()
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This and the other shoe photo would be a lovely pair hung on a wall.![]()
Thank you for your all advices.
In my head I am already planing a third picture -and then I'll tell you, who really has had danced in these shoes!
P.S.: tirediron was right: The last rose wasn't the freshest one - so I used in only this part a little bit "fractalius". Seems it works at least on Marco ;-).
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