These look decent overall Yisehaq but as always i got a few comments.

1 - Sharpness - these aren't as sharp as they should be especially shot 1.
A quick look at your exif data says this was shot at 1/13. This is too slow even on a tripod. 1/60 Minimum is what I recommend.

2 - Shot 1 is really nice and bright and the model has a lovely expression, but the model "may" find her arm a bit big. Turning her body more at a 45 degree angle might have been even better, or a wee bit more scarf on the shoulder. Shot 2 is sharper than 1 but the expression is lacking. It's a bit tight for me and the cropping looks off as well. The lighting also is not a pleasing as in shot 1.

Hope that helps - Marko